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I decided to repost my second elevator pitch because I received all positive feedback for it. I had addressed the issues identified in my first elevator pitch in it. I am hoping that by reposting it, either the first set of feedback (4 comments) will be validated or I will get feedback in this round to improve it. Obviously, I was surprised by the overwhelming positive feedback.
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ReplyDeleteI can notice the improvements that you've made from your previous pitch. You spoke more clearly and concise. You were moving your hands in a controlled manner, essentially drawing in the potential investors by exuding confident. This was an inspiring post. From watching your pitch a second time, I can also notice that you have a defined pitch for your product and if you were to say exactly what you said here to an investor in an elevator, you would've received funding/equity without a doubt.
heres the link to my blog:
http://www.leadingthechange.blogspot.com/
This is interesting, I like the quote. The middle class is very important in this country. I think you could elaborate on the three ideas you were talking about to help families in the middle class. These programs can help kick start the revolution you are talking about. I really like this, here is mine: http://entreprenuershipisamindset.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
ReplyDeleteYour idea to help improve the welfare of the middle class seems like a solid plan that a lot of people can get behind. Your body language and confidence were also superb and were in fact helping you gain my interest. These qualities will serve you well when you meet up with an investor for this idea. I hope this all works out for you! Here’s my link in case you wanted to see my idea. http://jacobembuscado.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.htm
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